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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Senad on January 03, 2007, 01:46:10 am

Title: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Senad on January 03, 2007, 01:46:10 am

Hey again, here is my orginal character, ROBO GOLEM that I sketched and planned at my work when the customers were asleep lol..

And I kinda have hard to do the metal on his body, so I would appriciate if you could post suggestions for something, give criticism, edit it to show me / help me etc. I would be very very glad!!
 
(http://i18.tinypic.com/48qgmyq.png)

 
Thank you, BJ !

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Ryumaru on January 03, 2007, 02:03:49 am

id love to give you an edit, but mouse drawing just isnt my specialty.
please do reinvestigate the deltoid and biceps, and the length fo the metallic arm. the abs also need some work.

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Akzidenz on January 03, 2007, 02:24:38 am

The anatomy is really bad, and he's really stiff, all around. Your anatomy on the other pieces was far far better, what happened?

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Senad on January 03, 2007, 02:29:14 am

:/ what u mean by anathomy?

I want him to have bigger upper body and smaller hand coz he dotn have half of the hand, he got this gún / laser instead..

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Indigo on January 03, 2007, 03:05:53 am

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v169/calypson/anatomcrit.png)

quick sketch.  Might be useful to you. I really need to get myself a tablet. 

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Senad on January 03, 2007, 04:10:16 am

wow whats cool, thanx

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: DevilDRake on January 04, 2007, 12:01:52 pm

hey bj its me kyle, nice work but yeah he is a bit stuff, the guy who did a quick scetch would make it better :P :P gl on it

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Helm on January 04, 2007, 07:09:20 pm

As said, the anatomy is really lacking. Indigo's edit is good if you want marvel-comics-style-anatomy, towards which I don't suggest you move to at your current level.

Title: Re: -= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]
Post by: Indigo on January 04, 2007, 08:12:12 pm

helms right.  At your level its probably best you don't distort your view of anatomy by stylistic proportions - though it did seem like you were heading in that direction anyway, thus my edit.  Study true life examples is my advice.