Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Evan on July 24, 2005, 04:45:20 pm

Title: Pain and Suffering
Post by: Evan on July 24, 2005, 04:45:20 pm

A few days ago, I was having a great time at America's Largest Water Park when I realized that I had not applied sunscreen recently. Needless to say, I ran back to a shady area to reapply, but to no avail. THIS was the outcome:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v601/StairwaytoEvan/Burn.png)

But now my sunburn is gone, and I can actually sleep.

I'm not too happy with the hair, because I don't know how to do hair. The rest is okay in my mind, but the background looks a bit plain to me. I'll try to fix some of this stuff.

In the meantime, you can feel sorry for me and give me some C+C.

Thank you!

Title: Re: Pain and Suffering
Post by: Peppermint Pig on July 25, 2005, 10:08:49 am

Owch, owch, owch, toasty?

Seriously, you look like you have a tongue on your back. Guess you missed a spot.

Title: Re: Pain and Suffering
Post by: Mercury Rising on July 25, 2005, 08:50:35 pm

Atleast you didn't burn to a yellow.  Sun poison stink badly.  CC on the hair, the left side looks like its a circle, just cut that off.

Title: Re: Pain and Suffering
Post by: DarkSword on July 27, 2005, 04:40:18 pm

Well, the hair is pillow-shaded. Just treat each spike of hair as a seperate entity and it should be fine.

The outline for the white part of the pants has bad jaggies. You might want to address that. Maybe add some AA to the whole pic, too.