Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Fredde on September 25, 2005, 02:05:06 pm

Title: Wip line arts.
Post by: Fredde on September 25, 2005, 02:05:06 pm

Some of my wip's.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v466/LttpCpp/wip_baby.png)

Screaming baby.


(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v466/LttpCpp/wip_troll.png)

Fat nosed troll.

I'd like some c+c before I go further.

Title: Re: More (wip) line arts.
Post by: CrematedPumpkin on September 25, 2005, 04:43:34 pm

Well the baby looks great, and the troll looks a little like my social studies teacher. I think they look pretty nice, but they both look too symetrical.

Title: Re: More (wip) line arts.
Post by: Fredde on September 25, 2005, 05:21:46 pm

Quote from: CrematedPumpkin on September 25, 2005, 04:43:34 pm

But they both look too symmetrical.

I tried to make the troll less symmetric making the tooths in diffrent shapes.

edit: added "hair" to the baby.

Title: Re: More (wip) line arts.
Post by: LuciferianSoul on September 26, 2005, 02:55:05 am

I think they look good so far, you should do alot more on the troll and repost it because at the moment theres not much to critique, it looks sweet at the moment.

And the screaming baby is quite humorous. :P