Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Senad on December 27, 2006, 02:16:59 am

Title: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Senad on December 27, 2006, 02:16:59 am
Heres my new WIP.. I tried pixeling a joker.. that represents myself.. thats my aka  :crazy:

(http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/1641/bjjokerdarkvp0.png)

Tell me what do you think so far?.. Its kinda new style for me so >< dont know if I will dither it.. but ill continue AA and make it smooth ;)

So any ideas to it? I have problems with mounth and Im planning to make a bit of a body too, down to his chest I think..

Enjoy, Thanx, B_J0k3r0
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: ZoSo on December 27, 2006, 02:28:21 am
Great piece.. :O, i think the colours need fixing.. they are kinda to hard for my taste. Something like this would be alot nicer..
(http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7545/jokerzzni7.png)

But its your piece, dont know what style your shooting for.. and yea, you should dither between the colour changes.. would look allot better. Keep it up!
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Senad on December 27, 2006, 02:34:13 am
wow thats great, love the hair, just dont like "green" tiger marks on the right side of his face.. I would like to make a bit tiger look.. maybe opened mounth and tiger teeth ? :D :P.. what do you think?

great colors ! thanx, thats much better, Ill take ur colors for hair if u dont mind :P.. and I will try something similair for the skin, thank you !
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: ZoSo on December 27, 2006, 02:26:00 pm
Sure you can use my colours if you like, i dont mind :). Yea i did't really know it was tiger marks :o.. So i just took something "magical" for those spots. Looks great, i love the concept. You better finnish this :D. And for the mounth, dont change anything :D. I love it as it is.
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Scotteh on December 27, 2006, 03:41:41 pm
Yours an awsome pixelest, I have a feeling you could be the next snake  :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o :o
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Ryan Cordel on December 27, 2006, 05:33:38 pm
Although he is very good, that statement is just too farfetched to think about.
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Stwelin on December 27, 2006, 05:45:59 pm
The piece looks really great. The hair coming down over the shoulders seems a little out of place to me, but if you feel its necessary to keep them... well, it's your work. :P The lines (makeup) around the mouth looks a bit sketchy to me, but it's a WIP so i am assuming you will clean that all up in due time.

I really like how the hair is done towards to the top of the piece, it's more twisted and such, it almost looks like lightning.

@scotteh: they are both talented in their own respects. There is too large of a gap between the styles of different artists here, it's not fair to compare them.
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Scotteh on December 27, 2006, 06:29:55 pm
i wasnt comapring them, i was saying it because snake is awsome, and im tryin to say he awsome too
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: sharprm on December 27, 2006, 10:49:06 pm
When you drew this, did you have a picture in front of you that you based this off?
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Senad on December 27, 2006, 10:53:02 pm
No, acctually I dew this joker at work.. I was bored as hell.. allmost no customers, so I drew with pen.. sketched.. when I came home I decided to pixel it :D
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: sharprm on December 27, 2006, 11:02:18 pm
sry, last time i'll will ask that question. Anyway, no crits except maybe the ear should be moved down a bit. 
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Senad on December 27, 2006, 11:40:41 pm
Al right, Ill fix it.

heres another thing I drove beside that..

(http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6585/robotvd3.png) orginal char..

PROGRESS ANIMATION http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6572/senadxi0.gif  SIZE: 1MB
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: and2 on December 28, 2006, 12:07:02 am
wow man  ;) this is a great piece of work.. This new style really kills the rs related pixels you did  :y:
also.. Love that sketch.
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: SolidIdea on December 28, 2006, 03:32:13 am
-You should fix the eyeballs (especially the iris), they look misplaced within this piece.
-The tattoos should follow the face shading.

And you shouldn't color reduce and resize stuff. Take the picture as reference, and try to drawn looking at it.
Title: Re: [WIP] ~ J O K E R ~
Post by: Senad on December 28, 2006, 05:45:32 am
-You should fix the eyeballs (especially the iris), they look misplaced within this piece.
-The tattoos should follow the face shading.

And you shouldn't color reduce and resize stuff. Take the picture as reference, and try to drawn looking at it.
? I am not, and its just a wip
,thanx