Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Malor on December 19, 2006, 10:46:23 pm

Title: I gots new shoes, new version added
Post by: Malor on December 19, 2006, 10:46:23 pm

Well, while sitting in class, I was doodleing on a small peice of paper, and came up with a sort of edward-salda fingers kind of looking guy, who just got a brand new pair of shoes, glee fully excalming "I gots new shoes!" and I decided to pixel it....crits please?  :)

(http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/9108/igotsnewshoesgn6.gif)

wooo C/C is very welcome :)

well using C/C I...re did him, kinda creepy old-man-ish now.........

(http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5813/igotsnewshoesnewshadingna8.gif)

Title: Re: I gots new shoes
Post by: Malor on December 20, 2006, 12:23:43 am

hey wait...does this mean its perfect, or people dont feel like commenting? :(

Title: Re: I gots new shoes
Post by: Terley on December 20, 2006, 01:11:33 am

its bin like 2 hours.. I live in britain and here everyone's going to bed. But I personally haven't got anything 'useful' to say.. would you care for a compliment?  :hehe:

I like it, made me smile with the outragous smiley face.. especially like the shoes, vry cute.

Title: Re: I gots new shoes
Post by: Stwelin on December 20, 2006, 01:20:19 am

I'm not a huge fan of the dithering, and the shading on the shirt is much too ambiguous, it looks like he's wearing a potato sack. the teeth lack definition, maybe go back with a darker tone and fill them out so they look like a set of chompers instead of scrambled eggs.  The shape of the head could be a little more interesting too, it would make the character have more of a personality if it weren't just a simple circle.   Also, the highlights in the eyes would look better if they were the same shape.  maybe give him some hands?

The overall piece has potential, it's an interesting character. he did make me chuckle. :P

Title: Re: I gots new shoes
Post by: Malor on December 20, 2006, 01:43:20 am

never thouhgt of that Terley :-[...anyways, thanks for the crits..and the completments, Ill add some ahnds, and possibly even work on the head, I will try to make some changes to the shading, thanks agian all  :)

Title: Re: I gots new shoes, new version added
Post by: D39 on December 24, 2006, 05:06:15 am

I like the updade :) its alot creepier. Reminds me of salad fingers lol.

Title: Re: I gots new shoes, new version added
Post by: Malor on December 24, 2006, 05:47:54 pm

thats why  was going for, thanks :)

Title: Re: I gots new shoes, new version added
Post by: CrematedPumpkin on December 24, 2006, 06:25:06 pm

I actually prefer the first one. The second looks, uh, dirty? Not sure what I'm trying to say. I just prefer it.

Title: Re: I gots new shoes, new version added
Post by: Malor on December 24, 2006, 06:55:09 pm

I prefer it aswell, which is why its not my avatar..o.0