Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Scotteh on December 15, 2006, 04:17:02 pm

Title: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Scotteh on December 15, 2006, 04:17:02 pm: Can't remember whos lines but still credit to them ;)
(http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/8530/doggyvx8.png) Current:(http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3981/doggyrw4.png)
C+C please and anything else :)

Edit: Blackeyes lines ;D and changed title ;)
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Tube on December 15, 2006, 09:14:47 pm: too beaver-ish

the teeth dont make any sense for a dog.
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Scotteh on December 15, 2006, 09:23:29 pm: Not my lines :P Besides its supposed to be cartoonish I think
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Panda on December 15, 2006, 09:28:48 pm: Are you sure it ain't meant to be a rabbit/hare? :crazy:
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Scotteh on December 15, 2006, 09:44:27 pm: I dunno, i thoguht it was a dog with buck teeth but i might be wrong lol (waits for the person who created lines to come tell us) :crazy:
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: skw on December 15, 2006, 09:48:57 pm: maybe just link us to the site where you found it? :)
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Rerg1 on December 15, 2006, 09:52:47 pm: Scotteh, I want to say how I feel your improving slowly but productivly.
Keep it up!.
I think it is time you start make a new Avtar.
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Soup on December 15, 2006, 10:33:22 pm: You have improved.
Title: Re: Doggy
Post by: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 01:59:59 pm: ;D Thank you everyone!!!!

@Skurwy: I found it in the lineart thread here or on PJ, can't remember(I have a realy bad memory :crazy:)

@Rerg1: Thank you for your comment, i might make a new avvy but not sure what to make :)

@Soup: Thank you :)
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Skull on December 16, 2006, 04:19:22 pm: Very nice, I've seen the lines before, and you've taken a very simple approach to this, and it looks really good. Nice work on the teeth.
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 04:27:41 pm: Thanks Skull :)

Has anyone got any crits on improving this?(Bearing in mind that I went for a simple style)
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Larwick on December 16, 2006, 07:29:32 pm: Quote from: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 04:27:41 pm
Has anyone got any crits on improving this?(Bearing in mind that I went for a simple style)

AA and/or selout. Also clean up some of the shading, especially on his ears, it's far too randomly placed. Also, i think more definition with the whites would look good.
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 07:37:16 pm: Added AA :)
(http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3981/doggyrw4.png)
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Jamie on December 16, 2006, 09:00:09 pm: i made a quick edit yesterday, i dont know if it will help.

(http://img446.imageshack.us/img446/1171/hane6.png)

colours got darkened when saved to png, dont know what else to save in but you get the idea..
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 09:03:22 pm: Thanks Jamie, but I was going for a non-dithered simplistic style but I might make a more detailed style :)
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Larwick on December 16, 2006, 11:28:44 pm: I didn't mean AA the outside..

Jamie's palette is quite nice, adds alot of life.
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 11:34:24 pm: :o :o
(http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6423/doggy2il1.png)

Is that what you meant? ???
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Jamie on December 16, 2006, 11:39:55 pm: Quote from: Larwick on December 16, 2006, 11:28:44 pm
I didn't mean AA the outside..

Jamie's palette is quite nice, adds alot of life.

That's weird considering i never changed the colours, only one of the darkest browns by a tiny bit.

Edit - i put both side by side and colour picked, and some colours are slightly diffrent values but not by alot barely noticeable i thoght (plus could of got changed a bit when saving?)
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Scotteh on December 16, 2006, 11:40:35 pm: Quote from: Jamie on December 16, 2006, 11:39:55 pm
That's weird considering i never changed the colours, only one of the darkest browns by a tiny bit.

:lol:
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Larwick on December 17, 2006, 12:15:18 am: To me it seems you added a colour with a far redder hue in there..

If not, you used the colours more effectively.
Title: Re: Rabbit/Hare
Post by: Blick on December 17, 2006, 12:35:30 am: He made the outline brown and thus made the colors within the brown outlines seem more brown and perhaps even brighter than with the black outline.