Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Fool on December 14, 2006, 05:29:46 am
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Could use some help on pose and anything else.=)
(http://www.foolstown.com/fool/hore.gif)
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on the skin i think you should tak out one of those buffer shades. she'd look so much better
on perspective I think you should lengthen and add height to her body. she looks a bit dwarfsh as of yet. :/
other than that its going quite well :)
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whore.
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on perspective I think you should lengthen and add height to her body. she looks a bit dwarfsh as of yet. :/
I'm afraid this not an option, I fully get sprite heights limits, she's supposed to look cartoonish. Thanks.
Which shade did you mean?
clr, thank you.=)
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probably the 3rd darkest one
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probably the 3rd darkest one
Nope, it doesn't work that well. Thanks=)
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I love the look of her. Cute and sexy!
Everything about her is fantastic. My only suggestion would be to make her right arm a little bit longer.
lol. What a title. "Whore!" haha
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I love the look of her. Cute and sexy!
Everything about her is fantastic. My only suggestion would be to make her right arm a little bit longer.
Thank you=) (updated)
lol. What a title. "Whore!" haha
Well, that what the character should be. ( I hope it not a really bad word - I'm learning english from my kids=))
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Her left shoe looks a bit odd, a bit to round IMO.
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(http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b344/pixelarooo/edit.png)
Tried to smooth out her hair a bit since it looked kin do rough compared to the smoothness in other parts of the sprite. added one color.
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Well, that what the character should be. ( I hope it not a really bad word - I'm learning english from my kids=))
Well, to put it in perspective, if I said whore at the dinner table, my mother would slap me and my grandmother would cry. Not a word to throw around casually in a formal setting. "Working girl," "call girl", or simply "prostitute" are better non-offensive choices.
Only thing that bugs me with the actual sprite is the shading around the stomach. It's border-line pillow shaded. There's also some weird blurry thing happening with the right leg.
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Well, to put it in perspective, if I said whore at the dinner table, my mother would slap me and my grandmother would cry. Not a word to throw around casually in a formal setting. "Working girl," "call girl", or simply "prostitute" are better non-offensive choices.
Only thing that bugs me with the actual sprite is the shading around the stomach. It's border-line pillow shaded. There's also some weird blurry thing happening with the right leg.
Man...I got to talk to my kids.=)) I'll fix it right now. Thanks. I don't know what I could do about blurring right now - I'll fix it when I get her over actual background and i got yeah with the shading - fix it when I'll get home. Thank you=)
Pixelaro, I like it like that too I had it on a first edit, but in another place they convinced me to fix it - said looks like sausages. :'( Well, may be mine was. :) Thank you for taking your time to edit - i still think to change it back.=)
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Hi Fool, I love your work, this piece is looking great. The new dog animation is outstanding.
I do agree with gliding about her looking dwarfish. It's always good to make the legs/lower body of women longer as the upper by some amount. Even if cartoonish, though that may just be me.
I hope you consider completing your dragon, you can't waste what you have there already :) :'(
[EDIT]: Could a mod please delete my second message, I wanted to edit but quoted accidentally :huh: Done
[EDIT] Thanks.
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Hi Fool, I love your work, this piece is looking great. The new dog animation is outstanding.
I do agree with gliding about her looking dwarfish. It's always good to make the legs/lower body of women longer as the upper by some amount. Even if cartoonish, though that may just be me.
I hope you consider completing your dragon, you can't waste what you have there already :) :'(
Thanks. I've tried to give her less chest and less stomach area to get longer legs - it just started looking like pixeldoll which is not what I have in mind. She ought to look sort of cute, sort of funny and a bit vulgar - just an accent perhaps, in game she turn into green lipsy thing. I think I'll redraw concept of her.
I don't know, man - I did that dragon just for practice. Do you want to adopt it and finish? I've got a lot of pix put away for different reasons - mostly lack of skills=)), I'd rather work on those when I got a chance.=)
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Really nice, me liek.
Buloght: "Hi Fool"..that doesn't sound right for some reason :P
I really like this piece, but the....things around her legs (Sorry, English ain't my native language) look unfinished to me.
Maybe add some lighting?