Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: lumine on October 25, 2018, 03:28:58 pm
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yello, since this is my 1st post, ive decided to ask critique on one of my more recent works. my biggest problem with the sprite is the arms, which is something i usually struggle with.
(https://i.imgur.com/MBr2IwM.png)
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The wing would benefit from a redraw - I see some misplaced pixels there.
I like the use of blue as a shade of black, it works well.
If the bee is supposed to be flying, the bottom of the bee looks a bit weird, like she's standing on invisible ground.
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Shading is flat, not interesting design.
Messed with it, pulled out some recurring stuff and invented others, shaded to front light source
(https://i.postimg.cc/cJ444skg/notthebeeedit.png)
Some of Arne's really old tutorial (http://androidarts.com/tuts/process.jpg) probably slipped into this. Worth the read, could make it more interesting.
Feel free to analyzzzzzzze.