Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: halu on December 08, 2006, 11:20:59 pm

Title: Lungs
Post by: halu on December 08, 2006, 11:20:59 pm

Yay for shit art :D!
(http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p40/halokun/Lungs.png)
Alright, I wanna seriously start improving on pixel art, and the best way to do it is practice and get crits, and the forum I go to is shit when it comes to art...  and pretty much anything else at that.
So, criticize away.

Title: Re: Lungs
Post by: halu on December 10, 2006, 12:19:20 am

Ok, I know for a fact this isn't perfect, anybody got some crits to lend me.

Title: Re: Lungs
Post by: AlexHW on December 10, 2006, 03:22:08 am

its a good start..
Id say it is a bit bland looking.
I dont know how lungs correctly look so i cant comment on that aspect.
from a pixeling standpoint, id suggest dropping the dithering since it suggests a bit of texture, and as far as i know lungs are smooth and shiney.. perhaps you could add some speculars/shininess to it..
also the aa around the line art makes it seem blurry.
I'd try to make the forms look more volumous, id suggest studying some basic forms like a cylinder for the breathing pipe to get ideas on how to do it.

Title: Re: Lungs
Post by: halu on December 10, 2006, 02:46:52 pm

Thanks Alex, I'll go ahead and work on what you said.