Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: EndarRaven on September 17, 2018, 03:54:34 pm

Title: [CC] Female Character
Post by: EndarRaven on September 17, 2018, 03:54:34 pm

Materials of clothing must be dark leather with armor plates (metal, but i'm thinking about something else) UPD: <- poorly formulated idea
And i think there lack of contrast, but im not sure how to add it without losing main color (actually, i want more dark color as main color)
Looking for advise and critique

(https://i.imgur.com/JmKgEfD.png)

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: EndarRaven on September 19, 2018, 01:21:38 am

Tried different colors
(https://i.imgur.com/LHodzVW.png)

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: MysteryMeat on September 19, 2018, 09:29:37 am

Doesn't really read as armor at all, tbh. More of a stripper outfit. That's my personal tastes showing though, if you're going for a "sexy" outfit then you're on the right track there.

Something you might consider is some accessories (a belt of throwing knives, a satchel or two, etc)

Here's some pictures of leather women's armor from google for inspiration:

(https://armstreet.com/catalogue/small/leather-womens-armor-shieldmaiden-5.jpg)
(https://i.pinimg.com/236x/36/d2/cc/36d2cc3d6966d1c60d068d19a3d02d29.jpg)
(https://medievalboutique.com/5171-home_default/damiane-breastplate.jpg)

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: EndarRaven on September 23, 2018, 01:31:16 am

Well, i was not going for leather armor look
Those colors was misleading

So i recolored it again
There's shoud be armor plates, but main clothing is supposed to be "sexy" and not defensive
Something like ninja, but tight-fitting i dunno

(https://i.imgur.com/oxH3SSM.png)

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: MysteryMeat on September 23, 2018, 05:40:48 am

... you said in the op you want leather with plates, lol

in that case, doing fine

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: EndarRaven on September 25, 2018, 07:09:25 pm

Tried something different

(https://i.imgur.com/FWBpk6t.png)

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: MysteryMeat on September 25, 2018, 11:41:56 pm

lookin' pretty good, though I think the older version of the torso sold the sexy more. The boots, sleeves, pants, and shoulders are all massive improvements to the design however, I think you just gotta get back to the fishnet and that wishful-thinking tube top to get back into proper softcore porn territory.

This one also kinda highlights how stiff her arm is however, you might want to adjust that! Try lowering her shoulder a pixel so she looks a bit less tensed-up and give the arm a bit of a bend.

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: Schwee on September 26, 2018, 12:43:46 am

I say just because its 2018 doesn't mean you should give up on your stripper-warrior dreams. :P

Title: Re: [CC] Female Character
Post by: EndarRaven on September 26, 2018, 01:51:10 am

Fixed some details and tried new designs
(https://i.imgur.com/g5HSw2h.png) (https://i.imgur.com/MBbzk0O.png) (https://i.imgur.com/dSQwZGS.png)