Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ragnarok on December 05, 2006, 04:37:12 pm

Title: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Ragnarok on December 05, 2006, 04:37:12 pm

So I made these two!
(http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/13231_Pine%20Tree%20Snowy.bmp)(http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/13231_Pine%20Tree.bmp)
Which is better? And do they stink or not?

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Adrian on December 05, 2006, 05:49:30 pm

I think the one on the right is better. They don't stink, but I think you should lose the black outline.

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Ragnarok on December 05, 2006, 07:34:11 pm

There is no black outline- it's just dark colours of the same as the colour they are nect too.

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Kcilc on December 05, 2006, 07:40:18 pm

I prefer the one to the right, and they don't stink, but they could use some texture.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v350/Daroge/Edits/13231_PineTreeEditedbykcilc.gif)

The things that I changed:

I. I changed the colours, gave it a highlight, and brought the colours down to 6.
Remember that the hue slider is your friend while shading.

II. Gave it some texture, and added more detail to the trunk.

III.  And killed most of the outline.

Happy pixeling!

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Ragnarok on December 05, 2006, 08:58:36 pm

O.K., a new one.
Edit: (http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/13231_Pine%20Tree2.bmp)

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Elrinth on December 05, 2006, 09:04:32 pm

that one is waay too one coloured :D

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Grynz on December 06, 2006, 11:48:55 am

There is one useless shade on the left of the tree.

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Skull on December 06, 2006, 04:17:47 pm

Quote from: Delphinus on December 05, 2006, 08:58:36 pm

(http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/13231_Pine%20Tree2.bmp)

There needs to be a more dominant dark shade, so far, there's only specs of it dotted around.

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Ragnarok on December 06, 2006, 06:59:53 pm

And another small edit...
(http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/13231_Pine%20Tree2_1.bmp)

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Rox on December 06, 2006, 07:23:19 pm

That made a huge difference. It actually looks like it's got some sort of shape now. But you're still wasting a shade in that blueish green on the left side. Make that darker, also, because now you can't see it unless you already know it's there.

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Adrian on December 07, 2006, 05:12:21 am

The middle of the tree is deformed.

Title: Re: I was feeling festive.
Post by: Ragnarok on December 08, 2006, 04:44:41 pm

OK, Yet another edit! (http://www.toolkitzone.com/vault/stuff/13231_Pine%20Tree2_2.bmp)