Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: glisean on August 20, 2018, 12:59:23 am

Title: Treeee (help me)
Post by: glisean on August 20, 2018, 12:59:23 am

Trying my hand in the pixel editor.

Tips?

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/335190698448125952/480846837335588874/tree.PNG)

(https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/335190698448125952/480895281202724875/unknown.png)

Title: Re: Treeee (help me)
Post by: Rydin on August 20, 2018, 08:36:50 pm

Hi Glisean!

I like it.  :y:

The inside tree flesh tends to be lighter colors than the outside part of the tree.
I also made your lights lighter and darker darker overall:
(https://cdn.pbrd.co/images/HA5ZS35.png)

Title: Re: Treeee (help me)
Post by: glisean on September 09, 2018, 07:14:28 pm

Quote from: Rydin on August 20, 2018, 08:36:50 pm

Hi Glisean!

I like it.  :y:

The inside tree flesh tends to be lighter colors than the outside part of the tree.
I also made your lights lighter and darker darker overall:
(https://cdn.pbrd.co/images/HA5ZS35.png)

Looks so much better!

Title: Re: Treeee (help me)
Post by: pistachio on September 12, 2018, 12:43:12 pm

I would take it even further than Rydin and push the core shadows even more:

(https://s22.postimg.cc/wz8is5zep/stumpededit.png)

Opposing those shadows/dark spots, the light is "clumped" to a point (focal point).

That technique goes back ages, but gives it something extra at this size.