Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: shinydarklink on December 03, 2006, 12:38:59 am
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Ey, Shiny here.
I started this tileset a few days ago, but I can't seem to get a decent looking shrub going on....
Help XD
NEW:
(http://www.geocities.com/shinydarklink/ts_holiday_2.png)
OLD:
(http://www.geocities.com/shinydarklink/ts_holiday.png)
C&C pwease =)
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Wow, very nice colours and texturing. Love it.. :o
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I like it too, however, it lacks any true lightsource.
other than that- great ^^
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I have to agree very nice colouring, especially the pinkish hue of the boulders.
The only significant problems I have are the hard dark outline on the edges, and the inconsistent use of dithering between colours.
Here's a quick edit:
(http://surtspixels.googlepages.com/ts_holiday_edit.png)
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@ZoSo
Heh, thanks ;)
@gliding
I chose to highlight places that normally wouldn't be lit because I thought it looked allot better.
@surt
The boulders are my favorite part heheh =D
Nice edit you did there, heres my version with your crits in mind:
(http://www.geocities.com/shinydarklink/ts_holiday_2.png)
Any more crits? Especially on that shrub >_> I don't like it at all.
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The problem I see is that the hue shift seems to stand alone, without the help of a value shift as well. Darken up that purple, in other words.
The bush looks to be more of a tropical plant than one to grow out of a cliff. Maybe make it something a bit less leaf and a bit more stem?
I love the rocks and how they have such well-defined, yet not harsh sides.