Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Soup on November 26, 2006, 09:22:07 pm

Title: You know that Face Project-
Post by: Soup on November 26, 2006, 09:22:07 pm

(http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y285/rapwarrior50cent/Face.png)
I made lineart for it.
Crits before I shade?

Title: Re: You know that Face Project-
Post by: Terley on November 26, 2006, 10:01:41 pm

jst a few things yeah, his heads a tad too wide, and considering the position of his eyes and brows it looks as if his heads about to pop, doesn't help that his shoulders are so narrow.. His nose is a tad chissled, in fact a few bits of this just don't look natural, I'd just change the general shape of his head, hint the bottom of his nose, lower his eyebrows etc, just work on your facial anatomy a bit.

(http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1227/dudevt3.png)

Title: Re: You know that Face Project-
Post by: Soup on November 27, 2006, 12:02:13 am

(http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y285/rapwarrior50cent/Face.png)
Thanks
Is it better?

Title: Re: You know that Face Project-
Post by: Terley on November 27, 2006, 12:19:38 am

sorry, what did u change?  ???

Title: Re: You know that Face Project-
Post by: Soup on November 27, 2006, 12:24:42 am

I actually changed the line internally so both post changed.
I lowered the eyebrows
Lengthned the shoulders.
Move the eyes inward to define the nose.
Add the shape of the nose.