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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ar on November 19, 2006, 04:46:04 pm

Title: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
Post by: Ar on November 19, 2006, 04:46:04 pm

Hi all! My first post on Pixelation. (http://pixelperfect.nazwa.pl/pixels/smile_wink.gif)

I made some emoticons for forum/ website use and I need yours suggestions to improve them.
8 base colors and sometimes next 4 for elements like tongue or water drop.

What I have:
(http://pixelperfect.nazwa.pl/pixels/Smile%20beta.gif)

And animations:
Spining (http://pixelperfect.nazwa.pl/pixels/Smile%20Spin.gif)
Bouncing eye (http://pixelperfect.nazwa.pl/pixels/eye.gif)

C+C are welcome.
Sorry for my 'English'. (http://pixelperfect.nazwa.pl/pixels/smile_tongueincheek.gif)

Ar.

Title: Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
Post by: EyeCraft on November 19, 2006, 05:56:53 pm

Hi there, welcome to the forum. I reckon you should darken that brown you have for the mouths and eyes. Make them like a dark purple or something like that, to add a little more contrast. Otherwise theyre fine, really smooth.

Title: Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
Post by: Ryona on November 20, 2006, 03:10:53 pm

Those smilies are so cute! ^_^
I really like them alot. And the animations are real smooth.

I would also suggest for the eyes and mouth to be a touch darker. Especially the eyes.

Title: Re: [WIP] Some smiles need critics.
Post by: Gunne on November 20, 2006, 03:17:09 pm

I dunno if it is the brightness, but I've no problem with the eyes and mouth, although they may be a little darker brown..

yea, I like them :)