Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Flem1000 on February 04, 2018, 09:46:21 am

Title: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Flem1000 on February 04, 2018, 09:46:21 am

So one of my friends told me that this looked like a cookie.
(https://i.imgur.com/EHVch5R.png)
But it's supposed to be a coconut. Anything i can do to make it more coconut-like?
Or tho any feedback for this thing is appreciated!

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Hoogo on February 04, 2018, 10:26:12 am

Maybe you could try to have the three holes closer to one another and more on top of the coconut (edit: if you made the highlight smaller I think your character would look less flat  :) )

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Flem1000 on February 04, 2018, 10:29:50 am

Yeah, maybe. :/

But it just looks wierd when they are closer

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Hoogo on February 04, 2018, 11:02:53 am

I don't know if this is what you're looking for or if you like it but I edited your character a little:
(https://i.imgur.com/fB1blq9.png)

Hope that can help

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Flem1000 on February 04, 2018, 11:10:27 am

Hmm...It does certainly look less like a cookie. But i don't know if i like the shadows very much. Maybe i'll do something similar actually.
Thx for the edit!  ;D

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Hoogo on February 04, 2018, 11:13:58 am

My pleasure!   :)

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Flem1000 on February 04, 2018, 11:17:38 am

So I actually went with more shadow, and I like it. I think it looks less like a cookie now.  :)
(https://i.imgur.com/Zj3NA0t.png)

Title: Re: [Feedback] Little Coconut Creature
Post by: Hoogo on February 04, 2018, 11:23:47 am

You're right, it certainly looks less flat!