Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Jedemy on January 10, 2018, 09:09:53 am
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Hi folks!
Before i start to animate this, i would like to get your opinion! What do you guys think and how can i improve this?
(Only 2 shades each colour)
Thanks for your time!
(https://i.imgur.com/hweTipu.png)
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The colors look a bit dull, you could add some contrast to your palette.
(https://i.imgur.com/hweTipu.png)(https://i.imgur.com/td8YymI.png)
(I darkened the darker blue and the darker "white". I also changed the right end of its face, I think it looks better that way, but it's up to you :))
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Thanks Zanorin, it is way better indeed! :D
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Idle animation and walk animation
(https://i.imgur.com/V9vPMhK.gif) (https://i.imgur.com/vVQPTOH.gif)
Any feedback is welcome!
Restriction: 2 Shades each colour, 4 Frames
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The spikes on his back look better :y:
Idle: The tail motion is nice, you should also animate his body & his shoulders kind of the same "wavy" way, I think it's weird if his tail moves a lot and his body remains still..
Walking: It does look like he's walking, but it looks like it's missing half of the frames, it feels like a loop of the first part of his walking animation to me. But if you really want to keep it at no more than 4 frames, I don't really know how you could improve it ^^
Other than that they look nice ! Will they be in the same game as your witch ?
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Thanks for your feedback Zanorin, i should definitely need to work on idle animation!
I try to keep things simple as possible but also presentable. I am planning to have a lot of sprites in the game and if i try to make stuff too detailed , i will need a lot of time to finish them.
Yes it is in the same game as my Witch! :)