Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Adrian on November 14, 2006, 05:12:16 am
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Hi everyone. This is my first post here..and my first work. I love to look at all your works, they are very good and interesting. Anyways, I was hoping for some critique on these sprites I am redoing for a game. I know they need a lot of work.
(http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/8530/spreb3.png)
Yea.. the colors aren't quite right if you ask me. I'm just trying to get the best possible outcome with the best animation you can get in 2 frames. Please help!
//edit ptoing: Please don't make the images links, just remove the [url] tags
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here's a quick edit:
(http://www.finalredemption.com/stuff/adrianedit.png)
What i tried doing here is adding more contrast to the image, and I also tried to make the cape thing look more 3 dimensional, because the way you did the folds made it look a bit flat. I also took out some colors because they weren't doing much in the image, and I adjusted the face a bit to make it look more like a face.
hope this helps, and welcome to the forum!
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Alex's edit was a good one. The main issue here is contrast. The low contrast in your image makes it appear as though the character is continually in shadow. Mix up the values a bit to get more detail into the small sprite. I would add even a bit more contrast to Alex's edit to show more form...I would have more of a difference in value from the top-to-bottom and inner-to-outer-edge. Hope that made sense. :P
What is that he has in his hand? He's holding it like a cane, but it seems to be too short.
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looks like a dagger to me, this is definitely a cool sprite :)
take heed to Alex's edit critique, looks much better like that. See if you can apply that to the rest of the movements. :y: lookin' forward to more