Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Molemen Everywhere on November 21, 2017, 01:13:31 am

Title: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)
Post by: Molemen Everywhere on November 21, 2017, 01:13:31 am
So I've been playing this game called 'Paladins' quite a bit recently, and I decided to try some pixel art of a character called Seris.
I can tell that there is obvious imperfections, I would like critique on it. Thanks.
(I didn't make it exactly like the reference image on purpose)

My pixel art:

(https://i.imgur.com/Ue7zGUj.png)

Reference Imaged that I used:

(https://i.imgur.com/oxeGtF9.jpg)
Title: Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)
Post by: yrizoud on November 21, 2017, 02:06:30 am
You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.
Title: Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)
Post by: Molemen Everywhere on November 21, 2017, 02:26:31 am
You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.
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Title: Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)
Post by: eishiya on November 21, 2017, 02:29:04 am
Typo. They meant "fit".
Title: Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)
Post by: Molemen Everywhere on November 21, 2017, 02:43:31 am
You may want to avoid an outline for the cloth pattern. It will fir better as part of the cloth surface.
What do you suggest to change with it? I don't think it looks very improved by this.

(https://i.imgur.com/GBRERzx.png)
Title: Re: Seris Pixel Art (Need Critique pls)
Post by: IIRawsomeII on November 23, 2017, 04:49:42 pm
You are using pillow shadong which gives incorrect lighing. I reccomend shading from a light source. You can see what I'm talking about here: https://m.imgur.com/SMDVCsx