Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Silver91748 on August 30, 2017, 02:13:34 am

Title: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Silver91748 on August 30, 2017, 02:13:34 am

Can I get some critique on this bunker bed? I'd greatly appreciate it!

(http://i.imgur.com/Bs2ummY.png)

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Xenon02 on August 30, 2017, 12:17:40 pm

I think that Bunker bed look a little bit different

Like this

(http://i.imgur.com/WtK2xwH.jpg)

+ this bed doesn't have headrests

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Silver91748 on August 31, 2017, 04:01:01 am

I like the idea of it being a bunk bed- It'd make sense to have them inside a bunker with so little space. I'm not sure about the shadow casted from the top bunk or the ladder I put next to it. If there's anything else you notice I can improve on in the image lemme know  ;D

(http://i.imgur.com/Y0YglTj.jpg)

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Xenon02 on August 31, 2017, 10:07:20 am

Can you draw me where is the source of light and the shadow i think that this style of shadow doesn't fit ( but who know maybe it fits) my sugestion of the shadow under 2nd bed is to use 2 colors of black gray (to make effect that it fade away) But the figure of this bed is really nice ;3

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Silver91748 on September 02, 2017, 12:14:03 am

Apologizes for the late reply! I've been busy with school  :yell:

(https://i.imgur.com/FDOjPNp.jpg)
How's this? What would I do with the shadow from the light source? Also what would your thoughts be on the lamp?

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Xenon02 on September 02, 2017, 12:42:33 am

There are some issues one of them is the light (where is the light there is no shadow) and the shadow is where is the light. Second think the light dispersion (everything explained in the guide edit) and the lightened places (if they are lightened then you can add a highlight)

(https://i.imgur.com/wJIOqOe.png)

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Silver91748 on September 02, 2017, 05:36:00 am

(https://i.imgur.com/njCYLqF.jpg)

Okay, I added shadows where it was needed along with highlights. I hope I caught everything.

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Xenon02 on September 02, 2017, 11:28:24 am

Pretty close but the shadow is not yellow ;3 and shadows goes like that :

(https://i.imgur.com/RLkcdYC.jpg)

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: eishiya on September 02, 2017, 01:13:00 pm

Shadows go like that if the bed is right up against the wall and has solid "walls" instead of just posts. Don't forget that objects are 3D xP

Title: Re: Bunker Bed Critique
Post by: Silver91748 on September 03, 2017, 11:50:19 pm

(https://i.imgur.com/VTVsqQ2.jpg)

I apologize for the late responses throughout this critique; I've been busy with other jazz :P Thank you both very much for the help! I'm in love with the final outcome of this piece!