Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Afelium on August 18, 2017, 09:22:03 am
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Here's my 2nd pixel art on this forum.It's not complete but how is it so far?
(http://i.imgur.com/IkZ4qls.png)
made using paint.net
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Added details on the background
(http://i.imgur.com/iCSrmxN.png)
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here's an update:
(http://i.imgur.com/7l61vaN.png)
and here's the final(?) version:
(http://i.imgur.com/zrwV7uJ.png)
Please reply I'm looking for critique
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It's really a great pixel art ;D
Control of each pixel , details. Good job ;3 I want to create something similar in future ;3
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It's really a great pixel art ;D
Control of each pixel , details. Good job ;3 I want to create something similar in future ;3
Thank you very much. Im not sure about the shading of the pot on the right,what do you think of it?
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Well about i want to talk about the highlight first because the source of light is on the middle made by moon but the left side is highlighted but right no.About the pot on the right side and his shading is really good oh and i think that window border are on the right side are highlighted on right but the source of light is on the left from them same think is the left side with this window border
Waiting forward for your opinion ;3
Xenon
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You're right.I'll fix that
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I'm looking forward for your next edit
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here it is
(http://i.imgur.com/ZbaEveg.png)
I also added a picture on the right wall,but I don't like it very much;should I remove it?
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Hmmm about a picture I think that single picture doesn't fit well maybe give more pictures some circular border,square border,cat picture,big picture oh and I forgot to add that the windows with lighted version look more better than the not lighted becaause the lighted version got 2 layers and not lightdr version doesn't have it (it look a little bit jaggy) Oh and back to those pictures do you remember this Harry Potter corridors ? (many of pictures) try to experiment with it or give some other furnitures like Oil latarns with orange and yellow light or Wardrobe that cover a part of window.
(http://i.imgur.com/clQWQ1W.jpg)
Looking forward for your next edit ;3
Xenon
PS. Sorry for my english ;D It's not that great
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Hey, this is really cool! I love the detail you've put into it, I was working on it for about 5 minutes before I saw the tree out the window :P I like that you've kept the contrast low on the wallpaper so it lets the other elements stand out.
I made a few adjustments - changing the shading on the pillars to match the light source more, moving the highlight on the pot further from the edge to suggest roundness, and changing the lighting on the windows.
I also added a highlight to the candle to make it stand out, but that's just my personal preference, you may want to keep it subtle.
I like the picture, perhaps it's a bit close to the pillar so it feels squished?
Hope that helps, keep it up!
(http://i.imgur.com/XGL4l0z.gif)
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Honestly I'd say that loses a lot of the atmosphere the tileset had originally. Instead it may just be easier to move the moon over.
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Honestly I'd say that loses a lot of the atmosphere the tileset had originally. Instead it may just be easier to move the moon over.
Should I put the moon on the right?
about the shading of the pillar and the windows added by inkyglow (thank you very much for the edit):what makes the tileset lose atmosphere?
should I delete it or just edit it?