Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Risenshiney on July 21, 2017, 10:03:12 am

Title: Pearl Animation Crit
Post by: Risenshiney on July 21, 2017, 10:03:12 am

Hey, folks!

(http://i.imgur.com/HmqeGEA.gif)

Anyone got anything to say about this before I continue?

Title: Re: Pearl Animation Crit
Post by: MysteryMeat on July 21, 2017, 11:18:15 am

Leg moves but shoe does not. Looks off that way, some slight squashing may help.

Title: Re: Pearl Animation Crit
Post by: Risenshiney on July 21, 2017, 11:35:37 am

 :P As I thought.

Thanks!!

Title: Re: Pearl Animation Crit
Post by: Risenshiney on July 21, 2017, 11:58:43 am

Update! Hope its better now?
(http://i.imgur.com/uqsS1zS.gif)

Title: Re: Pearl Animation Crit
Post by: 32 on July 21, 2017, 12:12:00 pm

Your timing on everything is very stiff. All the action happens on the same frame. You might find it more interesting to offset the motion of some parts by a frame or two. Looking great though ;D

Title: Re: Pearl Animation Crit
Post by: Risenshiney on July 21, 2017, 02:38:07 pm

Hmm, I did think of that a little...

Made a slight change to the dress, crown and zip/zipper. Has it made a tiny difference at least? Its a bit tricky...

(http://i.imgur.com/w3ycrqZ.gif)