Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: snader on October 22, 2006, 08:04:55 pm

Title: Portrait of a girl
Post by: snader on October 22, 2006, 08:04:55 pm

Posted this on PJ aswell, just thought i'd show it here to get some better C&C, because there are quite some parts still bugging me

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/pristonia/Pixel%20Art/Portraits/portret_soozie2.jpg)

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: fil_razorback on October 22, 2006, 08:13:22 pm

She ain't green haired <=> You aren't snader <=> You fake !

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: Terley on October 22, 2006, 08:21:09 pm

Green hair? I don't get it...  :huh:

Looking good, im not too keen on the expression, maybe it's the teeth but still it looks pretty good so far. Love the palette but I personally would re-think the teeth' colours..

Im liking it though.

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: Gunne on October 22, 2006, 08:24:26 pm

I think he was referring to this post http://www.wayofthepixel.net/pixelation/index.php?topic=9.msg7665#msg7665, correct me if I am wrong

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: Ryumaru on October 22, 2006, 08:42:43 pm

liven up the pallette. sure the colors are realistic, very realistic. but they definitely dont show the emotion of the girls face. also, this is a wip right?
this is very good, tecnically though.

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: snader on November 15, 2006, 01:29:21 am

i made some progress, mainly on the hair, and i did a quick contrast-upper

(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/9216275988portret_soozie3.PNG)

fil - yes i am!
terley - what do you mean change the colours? make them yellow or something? i'm kind of not wanting to add more colours. i wanna make it 16(inc. trans) total and i'm at 14 now so i cant add a yellow ramp.
KBS - i guess so. my hair is green again now though. not blue anymore.
Ryu - i've upped the contrast a bit, is this what you mean? yes. this is definitely still WIP

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: snader on November 27, 2006, 03:16:40 am

*poke*
(http://imagehost.ensellitis.com/imagesv2/0927987151portret_soozie5.PNG)

Title: Re: Portrait of a girl
Post by: Panda on November 27, 2006, 07:09:30 am

I just did a fast edit  on what I would change about it (hope you don't mind).
Again it's just a fast paint over and may not be perfect, but I just woke up :0!

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v131/Hagane/snader_face_edit.png)

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v131/Hagane/snader_face_edit.gif)

Uhm, I guess you can pretty much notice what I changed, but I pulled the nose 1 pixel, made the lips longer and thinner, balanced the eyes and made them longer and thinner, pulled up the cheeks, and tone down the darkest blue (the one on the eyes) and the darkest red (on the lips), and pulled the chin and one side of the face up.

Hope it helps you.