Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: zoekmath on March 09, 2017, 02:21:31 pm
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(http://i.imgur.com/QBSN7Kw.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/nabY8XI.png)
Hey, I've been trying to draw a kind of anime-styled sprites, any suggestions?
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Try making your clusters more blocky and not have as much stray pixels.
(http://i.imgur.com/1fwIW1Q.png) Here is an example of "better" clusters in the legs. You can see the pixels are more grouped together, which makes it overall more readable and nice to look at.
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(http://i.imgur.com/Y0S4gLI.png)
Thanks! Is that better?
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Unrelated to the previous crit, but I'm noticing her waist and legs look a bit off. The rings around her thighs and the way her pants bunch up makes it look like her crotch is lowered down a foot from where it should be and she has tiny legs. Try to tweak that area and fix the pants some !
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they look nice overall, i especially like the faces and the hair.
The right arm (from her perspective) of the lower one looks a bit weird, but i'm not sure how to improve that.
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you are amazing ;D
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Thanks! I made another one:
(http://i.imgur.com/1HliovK.png)
Does this one look better?
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Those are a lot cleaner than the stuff you used to post :)
The new sprite has nice contrast and the legs look better imo.
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I have to agree. Your stuff improved a great amount! :)
The ends of the hair at her back look a bit weird to me, as if they were tentacles.