Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: zoekmath on March 09, 2017, 02:21:31 pm

Title: [C+C] Characters
Post by: zoekmath on March 09, 2017, 02:21:31 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/QBSN7Kw.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/nabY8XI.png)
Hey, I've been trying to draw a kind of anime-styled sprites, any suggestions?
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: CFKaligula on March 09, 2017, 05:23:46 pm
Try making your clusters more blocky and not have as much stray pixels.
(http://i.imgur.com/1fwIW1Q.png) Here is an example of "better" clusters in the legs. You can see the pixels are more grouped together, which makes it overall more readable and nice to look at.
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: zoekmath on March 09, 2017, 07:54:44 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/Y0S4gLI.png)
Thanks! Is that better?
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: MysteryMeat on March 09, 2017, 10:12:06 pm
Unrelated to the previous crit, but I'm noticing her waist and legs look a bit off. The rings around her thighs and the way her pants bunch up makes it look like her crotch is lowered down a foot from where it should be and she has tiny legs. Try to tweak that area and fix the pants some !
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: Sersch on March 10, 2017, 09:01:52 am
they look nice overall, i especially like the faces and the hair.
The right arm (from her perspective) of the lower one looks a bit weird, but i'm not sure how to improve that.
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: BlackPandaah on March 15, 2017, 05:22:13 pm
you are amazing ;D
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: zoekmath on March 19, 2017, 12:42:55 pm
Thanks! I made another one:
(http://i.imgur.com/1HliovK.png)
Does this one look better?
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: Curly on March 20, 2017, 02:38:46 am
Those are a lot cleaner than the stuff you used to post :)
The new sprite has nice contrast and the legs look better imo.
Title: Re: [C+C] Characters
Post by: Pusty on March 20, 2017, 05:32:55 pm
I have to agree. Your stuff improved a great amount! :)

The ends of the hair at her back look a bit weird to me, as if they were tentacles.