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Critique => 2D & 3D => Topic started by: rocifier on March 02, 2017, 06:07:30 am

Title: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: rocifier on March 02, 2017, 06:07:30 am
Hey guys, I'm working on this concept for a point and click adventure game. I want to define the mood of this universe in the game (there is an alternative brighter, happier universe too). I'm having difficulty unifying the background with the foreground. Was wondering if anyone had any tips or suggestions about that?

(http://i.imgur.com/JsU579v.jpg)
Title: Re: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: eishiya on March 02, 2017, 01:02:03 pm
Do you mean the background with the...posters or whatever, as opposed to the midground/street?
It looks strange that the solid-looking street just fades out into ??? there. What is that area meant to be? It looks like a misaligned photo at the moment. Work on defining/suggesting the structure of whatever it is first, then paint it with some of the duller colours from the foreground to make it fit, including some of those warm oranges.
Title: Re: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: EvilEye on March 03, 2017, 02:46:26 am
Looks really good. You need some more lighting on the two humans, as they are surrounded by lights on almost all sides.

Then the background is devoid of any lights, yet it's not as dark as it should be based on the fact that it's night time and there is no artificial lighting that I can see. I would make it a lot darker and put up a lot of signs like you did everywhere else.
Title: Re: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: rocifier on March 03, 2017, 06:26:53 am
Thanks guys. I see what you mean, I need to decide how that area is structured. It's supposed to be some kind of incubated courtyard of advertisements. I'll define it more and remember the proper lighting when I redraw it. Will post an update soon.
Title: Re: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: rocifier on March 03, 2017, 09:55:26 am
Hmm what about this?

(http://i.imgur.com/Q3QzGvc.jpg)
Title: Re: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: MysteryMeat on March 03, 2017, 10:23:32 am
Feels much more complete now, yeah!
Title: Re: [C+C] Cyberpunk universe between heaven and hell
Post by: Bak on March 08, 2017, 12:31:12 pm
perspective is off, stuff you painted looks gloomier than those photos