Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Solace on February 23, 2017, 03:57:09 am

Title: New, Sprite C+C
Post by: Solace on February 23, 2017, 03:57:09 am

Hi,
This is my first post, so be gentle on me please... or be brutal (don’t let me tell you how to live your life)!

Joking aside, I would like some feedback on these two sprites I have been working on:
(http://i.imgur.com/frw3HCW.png)
The only real problem I have is with the second figure on the right. He has a hand placed on the top of his weapon, but it seems to blend in with the noise in his torso, making it unnoticeable. Other than that, I can’t really find anything else I did wrong.

Are there any blaring mistakes I’m not catching?

Title: Re: New, Sprite C+C
Post by: AppleGirl on March 02, 2017, 10:30:55 pm

You could try making him wear gloves? Maybe it would stand out more. I'm still new to pixel art so there's not anything I can see that's wrong. Great job!  :)

Title: Re: New, Sprite C+C
Post by: MysteryMeat on March 03, 2017, 01:08:59 am

(http://imgur.com/fyahLnP.png)
Teased the elbow out on the bazookaman's arm, and then added a blackish outline from orangelad's neck around the hands for better visibility on both sprites!