Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: IvanX on February 13, 2017, 09:39:11 am

Title: [WIP] Punk Walk Cycle
Post by: IvanX on February 13, 2017, 09:39:11 am

Been a while since I've posted here, and with another walk cycle!

(http://i.imgur.com/V5HLGKX.gif)

After staring at these pixels for hours it's gotten kind of hard to zero in on what needs fixing
thanks in advance for any C&C

Title: Re: [WIP] Punk Walk Cycle
Post by: rocifier on February 13, 2017, 09:49:43 am

Cool. Only thing I can see right now is she (it's a she right?) has quite large jolting steps but his body doesn't move much. Will have another look tomorrow.

Title: Re: [WIP] Punk Walk Cycle
Post by: MysteryMeat on February 13, 2017, 10:43:20 am

She turns a bit too much at the top, try to restrict that to the hips!
Alternatively, sway her towards and away from the camera for a sort of swagger effect

Title: Re: [WIP] Punk Walk Cycle
Post by: absenter on February 13, 2017, 02:57:29 pm

This is a pretty good start you have here.

(http://i.imgur.com/ZXswNzA.gif)

So, one of the things I'm noticing is the legs are changing volume fairly drastically in spots. If you pause on frame one and two and flip between them, you'll see that the thigh switches from being larger that the calf to being smaller. There are spots through the animation that this is happening and I think it might be the main problem.

(http://i.imgur.com/hjws4xX.gif)

I made a quick edit trying to take care of the major stuff. I hope this helps. :)