Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Naufon on February 05, 2017, 11:36:21 pm

Title: [C+C] Cartoon/Anime Top Down Character for an RPG
Post by: Naufon on February 05, 2017, 11:36:21 pm
I am needing critique and advice for this cartoon/anime/chibi'ish styled top down RPG character. I won't be editing this anymore but I would like to learn from my mistakes and flaws from it. One of my weak points I would say is getting the hair to look good with using darker shades of hair as well as highlights. I don't know how to stylize hair that well. I don't know of anything else that could make the sprite look any better. If anyone can spot anything else that I could do better upon, I would really appreciate it. Thank you.

Size is: 33x53

(http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll247/Scytharius/Girl%20Character%20Test%202.png)
Title: Re: [C+C] Cartoon/Anime Top Down Character for an RPG
Post by: Naufon on February 05, 2017, 11:47:19 pm
I can't modify the post above for some reason.

But one thing I want to add is that I want to make my characters look "cutesy" for an RPG dating sim that I have in mind. I feel like I haven't achieved this yet.
Title: Re: [C+C] Cartoon/Anime Top Down Character for an RPG
Post by: SWEGDovahkiin on February 06, 2017, 01:01:36 am
I think the head is a little bit too tall. Try fixing that, other than that though it look pretty good to me.
Title: Re: [C+C] Cartoon/Anime Top Down Character for an RPG
Post by: Curly on February 06, 2017, 01:18:38 am
Some ideas to make the face and head look cleaner and cuter
(http://i.imgur.com/baDx5Cs.png)
Title: Re: [C+C] Cartoon/Anime Top Down Character for an RPG
Post by: Naufon on February 06, 2017, 01:41:08 am
I think the head is a little bit too tall. Try fixing that, other than that though it look pretty good to me.

I didn't think I would edit this again, but I actually want to now to see what it would look like from critique.

(http://i290.photobucket.com/albums/ll247/Scytharius/Girl%20Character%202%20critique.png)

Not sure if it is any better.

Some ideas to make the face and head look cleaner and cuter
(http://i.imgur.com/baDx5Cs.png)

Wow. Yeah, that looks way better than mine. I will try to add a similar sort of thing to mine. :)

Thank you guys for your suggestions!