Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Achrileg on January 13, 2017, 08:31:17 pm
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(http://i.imgur.com/XANfQD3.gif)
Usually do stuff like this when tired of pixel-art or to just warm up.
What I want to know, as criticism - how easy/ hard is it to understand whats happening? I think I have a tendency of animating things that are hard to understand and have no flow. Seems fine to me, but that doesn't mean much.
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whats happening?
I see a person getting off the floor running up towards another. The other picks up the runner and throws him away into the distance. The part I don't understand is the hand before we see the person pushing itself up from the floor. I can not tell whose hand that is supposed to be.
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I see a person getting off the floor running up towards another. The other picks up the runner and throws him away into the distance. The part I don't understand is the hand before we see the person pushing itself up from the floor. I can not tell whose hand that is supposed to be.
Thanks, I got the problem, too quick on the transition - it's jarring. It's the runners hand, slapped on the ground, camera pans and rotates, then he pushes himself up and runs. It's supposed to be looping.
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I think it really reads good, except for the hand-part that 0xdb already mentioned.
There is another thing that bothers me:
The "runner" grabs the knee of the "stayer", but he easily throw him away. My mind can't accept that.
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I think it really reads good, except for the hand-part that 0xdb already mentioned.
There is another thing that bothers me:
The "runner" grabs the knee of the "stayer", but he easily throw him away. My mind can't accept that.
Thanks. I see what you mean, though, doesn't make a lot of sense! I guess I didn't put that much thought into it, just animated what felt right, but still... =p
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You are breaking the 180 degree rule, this majorly affects the readability, a simple edit to illustrate:
(http://i.imgur.com/A66nrOr.gif)
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You are breaking the 180 degree rule, this majorly affects the readability, a simple edit to illustrate:
Gotcha, thanks! Although I've heard of the rule, I don't consciously think about theory of choreography. Time to start. =p