Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Kcilc on October 14, 2006, 11:45:55 pm

Title: Avatar Time!
Post by: Kcilc on October 14, 2006, 11:45:55 pm

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v350/Daroge/Random/anatomy.gif)

I haven't posted in a while. Anyway, I've decided to make myself an avatar,
and the face is bugging me.

It's got 7 colors total.

CnC NEEDED

..::Update::..

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v350/Daroge/Random/SweaterMan.gif)

(Thanks to pawige for help with the face)

And... another update!

Thanks for the crits Alex.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v350/Daroge/Random/SweaterMe.gif)

I think it's finished now, I made that guy look like me.

Title: Re: Avatar Time!
Post by: AlexHW on October 20, 2006, 05:29:00 pm

nice colors..
i think the face needs work like you're saying..
probably the mouth area needs work the most, and the back of the head..
I see no ear..
the mouth could be smaller considering its from a side view.
I'd suggest looking at the ear area and the back of the jar, and see how it looks..
other than those things, it looks good
keep it up.