Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Rhubarbist on November 21, 2016, 11:20:55 pm

Title: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia
Post by: Rhubarbist on November 21, 2016, 11:20:55 pm
(http://i.imgur.com/Bh4VIls.png)

Could use some feedback, something feels off.
Title: Re: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia
Post by: Fieldren on November 22, 2016, 03:51:26 am
I know exactly what feels off.

Give that padrino-monkey a moustache, give it to him, don't ask, just GIVE IT TO HIM.
Title: Re: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia
Post by: MysteryMeat on November 22, 2016, 04:37:39 am
The wrist MIGHT be angled too far upwards for the arm length of a monkey, perhaps? makes it look like his elbow goes straight into his wrist.
Title: Re: [WIP] [CC] Space Monkey Mafia
Post by: MAVW on November 22, 2016, 06:00:21 am
Yeah, when you take off the hand it looks like everything is in order.
(http://i.imgur.com/jIYABJK.png)

(http://i.imgur.com/hLwxK40.png)
just a little repositioning kinda solved the problem.
the original placement feels off when you try to guess the position of the arm.
you can also add an extra highlight [like in this edit] as a way to help the viewer visualize it.