Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: AppleGirl on November 11, 2016, 02:40:59 am

Title: Need opinions on this art
Post by: AppleGirl on November 11, 2016, 02:40:59 am
Hello,
I these sprites I'm using for a game, and I think they match very well. I posted both. The one I'm having trouble with is the one in the blue sweater. I think his hair looks fine, but for some reason my brother doesn't like it. The hairstyle we're going for is like this: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/5a/c7/c0/5ac7c07984dea2b797d142e6ade978aa.jpg (https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/736x/5a/c7/c0/5ac7c07984dea2b797d142e6ade978aa.jpg)
(http://i.imgur.com/UBZDtY8.png)
(http://i.imgur.com/YOGK4NY.png)
Please leave your thoughts and critique. Thanks  :)
Title: Re: Need opinions on this art
Post by: Fieldren on November 18, 2016, 08:38:45 pm
Just made a quick sketch, let me know what you think.

(http://i.imgur.com/acdMr7a.png)
Title: Re: Need opinions on this art
Post by: Tezca on November 18, 2016, 09:16:31 pm
They guy in the blue sweater looks like hes shrugging. Is that intentional?
Title: Re: Need opinions on this art
Post by: AppleGirl on November 29, 2016, 06:49:55 pm
Nope he's not supposed to be shrugging, but I fixed that. Thanks Fieldren, that looks way better!  :y:
Title: Re: Need opinions on this art
Post by: AppleGirl on November 29, 2016, 06:54:26 pm
Alright, I fixed his shoulders (thanks Tezca for pointing that out  :)) I also made his eye color a little darker.
(http://i.imgur.com/cJGLGSC.png)