Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: AppleGirl on November 10, 2016, 10:27:23 pm

Title: First pixel animation
Post by: AppleGirl on November 10, 2016, 10:27:23 pm

blob:http://imgur.com/53ac40af-cef5-48b7-a436-459204f88e80 (ftp://blob:http://imgur.com/53ac40af-cef5-48b7-a436-459204f88e80)
I'm not sure how to post the animation directly on her, so I just put a link. I don't know if I should shade this, or keep it simple. Please leave your thoughts or tips!  :)
Edit: I redid the sprites because I didn't like how I did the arms. I'll post the animation as soon as I can.

Title: Re: First pixel animation
Post by: Curly on November 11, 2016, 02:35:58 am

The link doesnt work :S

Title: Re: First pixel animation
Post by: MysteryMeat on November 11, 2016, 02:49:45 am

you unfortunately can't right-click and link photos on imgur anymore due to some un-necessary changes to their coding, you have to use the copy function they provide or copy the url and append ".png" or ".gif" to the end, or whatever other filetype you used.

Title: Re: First pixel animation
Post by: AppleGirl on November 16, 2016, 01:31:08 am

Here we go:
(http://i.imgur.com/FbN2IqY.gif)
I tried to post the animation here using the img tags after making it a .gif, but it wouldn't show up :/

Title: Re: First pixel animation
Post by: Ainn on November 17, 2016, 03:22:03 pm

I think you should try to keep the torso from 'twitching' around like that. And there's a frame where the hair is flipped, so you might want to fix that. The pelvic area has a pixel that switches sides, and I find that a tad odd.

Title: Re: First pixel animation
Post by: AppleGirl on November 17, 2016, 10:59:32 pm

Thanks for you reply! I will definitely fix the things you pointed out. I'm fixing the animation right now  :)