Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Bunn on October 10, 2006, 01:55:47 am
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my third pixel stuff... this time a larger one... i tried to cut some collors, using just 2 or 3 for each...uhh... thing...anyway >_< tel me wath you think about it, good? bad? any advices? critics?.. i want to hear what you have to say.. even if its jus a ''YOU SUCK!'' coment XD
ps: the char is Vash the Stampede from Trigun Maximum
(http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3608/vashpixelfb0.gif)
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Anatomy is quite a bit off. He's got his hand on his hip which is more to the right than his ear. And the glasses are hard to distinguish, make's him look like Vash-Geordi ('This assasin has a high concentration of energy fluctuations!').
Just, please do something with the glasses, and make his waist bigger and less snake-man like.
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Doesn't Vash normally hold his gun in his right hand? lol.
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i like doing small hips, and the artist draw it like this too, but ill see what i can do, and ill try fixing the glasses too.
and yes, he holds the gun with his right arm, i just put it on the left one because it would make a more stylish pose XD
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Just a few quit crits before I get back to work:
The way his chest and hand is positioned makes him look pregnant. Flip the image horizontally and you'll get a totally fresh look at it. I can't really find a useful reference image, but it looks like his head is a bit too small. The perspective on the shoes doesn't match. The uber-dark red outlines aren't really serving any purpose.
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But is Vash a snake man? I couldn't think of a good way to put this and apparently my sucky way of putting it didn't work :-\...
His belly and hips go out farther than his chest, which is incredibly wierd as his hips are so small.