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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: BadMrBox on October 09, 2006, 04:40:52 pm

Title: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: BadMrBox on October 09, 2006, 04:40:52 pm: Hi, im new to this place. Nice to meet you :).
I have been thinking about maybe (just maybe) someday making a fighting game so training up the old pixeling would be a wise choice (it's a wise choice anyway as I am rather rusty and never really been doing large sprites).
(http://badmrbox.googlepages.com/girl.PNG)
What I know is wrong with this image is that there is to little colors used, her hands are not finished and even as I wanted her to be tall her legs seems to be a bit to long. What do you think?
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: Scotteh on October 09, 2006, 05:42:09 pm: i thnik you have overdone the legs, her torso is good, but the hair looks kinda weird, heres a little edit on the hair to show you what i mean:
(http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4107/girlfm7.png)

very good, and gl on making your game ;D
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: BadMrBox on October 09, 2006, 05:53:29 pm: Ah, yes. I forgot to mention that I wasn't to happy about the hair either. It doesn't look to good but yet I want her to have long hair in a ponytail of some sort but thanks for the edit anyway. It gave me something to think about :)
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: Scotteh on October 09, 2006, 06:21:18 pm: oh ok sorry didnt knmow that was what you were looking for :) good luck with it ;)
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: government.agent on October 09, 2006, 10:27:37 pm: Mr Box,

Welcome to Pixelation! Nifty little girl-fu sprite.
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: Pawige on October 10, 2006, 03:05:20 am: Been working on this one for a bit. If you like, I could list the things I changed and why, but that would take awhile, so I'll just let the edit speak for itself for now. Just let me know if you want more details on what I did.

(http://paul.gerla.us/images/girl.PNG) (http://paul.gerla.us/images/transform.gif)

The overall proportions are still a bit far from being quite right, but I got it closer anyway, and cut your color use down a lot (35 to 15). Ignore the pants, I wasn't sure if they were supposed to be leather or denim, so I just went nuts on them and never even finished them up. Hopefully you get something useful out of it! I had fun, either way. :P
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: government.agent on October 10, 2006, 05:36:59 am: Sweet Edit!
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: BadMrBox on October 10, 2006, 03:50:09 pm: Oh, nice edit Pawige! Very sweet indeed
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I wasn't sure if they were supposed to be leather or denim
It was from the beginning meant to be leather but I... eh, changed my mind somewhere halftrough, heh.
Title: Re: BadMrBox's Pixelart
Post by: Andy Tran on October 11, 2006, 03:42:35 am: I really like the edit pawige. That looks pro! I would recommend you to take that edit to advice.