Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Not4mortaleyes on October 03, 2016, 01:28:08 am

Title: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: Not4mortaleyes on October 03, 2016, 01:28:08 am

First off I would like to apologize for my lack of response to everyones feedback and advice on my previous threads and I will try to respond as quickly as I can from now on.

I decided to take a break from pixel art for a while due to school and other reasons and now that I have the time Ive started getting into it again. I made a skull since Halloween is around the corner.
(http://imgur.com/7TB3ZUP.png)
It looks fine to me but I know that there is room for improvement .

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: MysteryMeat on October 03, 2016, 01:46:27 am

Broken image link, friend!

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: Not4mortaleyes on October 03, 2016, 08:49:39 pm

it should be fixed now

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: washk on October 05, 2016, 01:38:38 pm

The jaw is maybe a little too square. But it look fine in itself, it's clean, shading seems ok to me. If I were you I would not try to improve it, except if you add it in the context of something bigger.

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: Rydin on October 05, 2016, 02:22:34 pm

Cool. Top right corner seems incorrect. Not round enough. The highlight seems out of place in relation to the other light on the other part of the skull. To be or not to be? That is the question.

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: Not4mortaleyes on October 05, 2016, 03:19:47 pm

(http://imgur.com/9AhxfF6.png)
i made some tweaks and started working on the rest of the body

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: Not4mortaleyes on October 06, 2016, 01:08:22 am

updated
(http://imgur.com/DXoBrKv.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: Not4mortaleyes on October 11, 2016, 03:03:20 pm

(http://imgur.com/ydMtzSo.png)
I added some arms and legs to this frighting fellow.

Title: Re: [C+C] skull and apologie
Post by: NowvaB on October 12, 2016, 01:21:37 am

Maybe the legs shouldn't be coming down at the same angle.