Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ovicior on September 30, 2016, 09:14:14 pm
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Hey guys,
I'm currently working on a short project, and am trying to make a Trump sprite. I think it looks alright, except for the hair. Perhaps the tie and white shirt could also use some work. I picked the black border as a stylistic choice.
Please critique this sprite in any way you can :D
(https://i.imgur.com/tM55AQT.png)
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I think if the hairline wasn't perfectly horizontal, it would look a little better. Also, isn't the Donald's hair more orange than yellow?
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I think if the hairline wasn't perfectly horizontal, it would look a little better. Also, isn't the Donald's hair more orange than yellow?
How about this? I found it a little difficult to break up the hairline.
(https://i.imgur.com/TVa6DEU.png)
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How about making it a gentle curve, something like this?
(http://i.imgur.com/OC2D3YX.png)
Originally I made the part over his forehead be the lighter hair colour, but it didn't stand out well against the skin colour, and I think the shadow makes it look more like it sticks out forward, which it does.
I also edited the hair colours a little but I'm not sure what to suggest with those, really.
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I think the colors are better, but the shadow on the brow looks... off. It doesn't look like a shadow to me.
Thanks for the help though :D
Here we are:
(https://i.imgur.com/bmHEuJ0.png)