Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: TheForgottenOne on September 29, 2016, 02:31:47 am

Title: Face Gif
Post by: TheForgottenOne on September 29, 2016, 02:31:47 am
Hello, i made my first pixel art animation

Real Size
(http://s14.postimg.org/qvizqqtch/Gif_image.gif)

Profile
(http://s16.postimg.org/fevpooait/PErfil.gif)

So i would like some destructive critics xD
Title: Re: Face Gif
Post by: Rydin on September 29, 2016, 04:33:38 am
The profile size suffers. There is no worse way to damage your pixel craftsmanship than to shrink it down and let the computer do the math.

How are these three elements being lit? Or do they produce their own light? And if so, why don't they illuminate the features surrounding themselves? At the moment it's just three disconnected organs in completely black space. No depth to the mouth. No socket for the eyes to sit in.

I imagine this on a busted television  :crazy:

Title: Re: Face Gif
Post by: MysteryMeat on September 29, 2016, 05:32:03 am
I accidentally gave it a bit of a flicker, but I popped in some various tweaks including a sped-up framerate and a closer-to-100 resolution, as well as some animationy bits:
(http://imgur.com/tdvyxqL.gif)
Edit: spoilered it, it seems a bit seizure-inducing to leave unhidden. Click only if not photosensitive!