Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: TheForgottenOne on September 21, 2016, 03:10:07 am

Title: Space moais
Post by: TheForgottenOne on September 21, 2016, 03:10:07 am

Hello!

I did a species of mountainous spatial valley, with moais.
I try to use another type of shade, of which I use regularly

(http://s15.postimg.org/7du9nnbez/Desolated_Valley.png)
I want to know your opinions

Title: Re: Space moais
Post by: MysteryMeat on September 21, 2016, 06:49:58 am

Honestly it feels kind of empty, like there should be something in the middle of all that . Like a spaceship hovering above the water or some kind of floating temple. As it is it's just a pretty but kinda focusless landscape.

Title: Re: Space moais
Post by: Tuna Unleashed on September 21, 2016, 07:45:43 pm

Love the atmopsphere and colours! I agree its in need of a stronger focal point, and i think the pattern you used for the sky is a bit odd. maybe try blocking in some clouds, and you could use them to frame the beam of light (assuming it's meant to be the focus)

Title: Re: Space moais
Post by: Vertigo on September 23, 2016, 09:34:25 pm

Those circle patterns and palette are marvelous, but I think you can make this beam a bit thicker to make a central point of landscape. Also I was never sure about gradient in pixelart... Maybe it's just me, but I think it shouldn't be used in this type of art... But I'm just a newbie, so I'm probably wrong. :P

Title: Re: Space moais
Post by: TheForgottenOne on September 29, 2016, 02:15:53 am

Thanks for the Feedback!!
Im going to fix some things, and give the landscape a central point