Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Senritsu on August 29, 2016, 08:42:10 pm

Title: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On
Post by: Senritsu on August 29, 2016, 08:42:10 pm

(http://i65.tinypic.com/t6z77l.jpg)

I've been working on an isometric sprite. I started with south since it was the easiest. Could use some critique on this, please.

Title: Re: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On
Post by: SimeonTemplar on August 30, 2016, 01:02:41 am

Great Base! I would reccommend some shading to add some depth.

Title: Re: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On
Post by: MysteryMeat on August 30, 2016, 01:06:57 am

Legs and arms are too short in comparison to the torso, looks like a dwarf. Shrink the torso some or elongate everything else.

Title: Re: [WIP] [CC] I Would Love Some CC On This Sprite I'm Working On
Post by: AimlessZealot on August 30, 2016, 01:17:16 am

I'm with SimeonTemplar and MysteryMeat. Great start, but the shading and skewed proportions should be pretty high on your objective list. I took a quick crack at adjusting them a little to give you a nice side-by-side comparison. Also, you'll notice that I marked the jaw line rather than letting it continue into the neck. This is because assuming you're going with the standard 3/4ths view, it would not be possible to see it as a continuous strip from this perspective. Thing 1 is the original, Thing 2 the revised.
(http://i.imgur.com/kiDKs7E.png)