Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Ponshu on August 29, 2016, 01:38:20 am

Title: [CC]Tips on some mountains I'm working on?
Post by: Ponshu on August 29, 2016, 01:38:20 am
Hello this is my first post on this website so I apologize if I mess anything up.Anyway I was hoping that I could get some tips on some mountains I'm working on.Mostly I need help adding small details and shading and possible some help to make the night sky more "exciting". http://imgur.com/4Jpk9wV
Title: Re: [CC]Tips on some mountains I'm working on?
Post by: TheFox on August 29, 2016, 03:06:33 am
(http://i.imgur.com/4Jpk9wV.png)

makes it easier for others^

The thing about mountains, at this scale they are far away. So the mountain in farthest back should have less saturation in it than the ones in the front. Compositionally, the piece could have more of a foreground and mid ground. Or you could have more interesting mountain shapes.

example of atmosphere/composition:
(https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/25/32/fa/2532faada16a98419c033249965f1f4b.jpg)

Anyway, just keep at it and you'll get somewhere with it. I like the idea of their he moon lighting the mountains(probably need the light to have a bit more direction to it). Maybe add some clouds? Anyway good luck, hope this was helpful.
Title: Re: [CC]Tips on some mountains I'm working on?
Post by: Ponshu on August 29, 2016, 06:42:28 pm
Do you mean something more like this?
http://imgur.com/MjChg4l