Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: [Friends] Ro$$ on August 27, 2016, 04:52:36 am
Title: Warrior
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on August 27, 2016, 04:52:36 am
I'm working on animations for an enemy. It's still WIP, but I feel like the animation is good enough to get some critique on it. Thanks for the help! (http://i.imgur.com/eqXPoHz.gif) (http://i.imgur.com/X9wHE36.gif) Old:
Run V1:(http://i.imgur.com/igEV87R.gif) Slash V1:(http://i.imgur.com/VTBR8CM.gif) V2:(http://i.imgur.com/QzlOroc.gif)
Title: Re: Running Warrior
Post by: MysteryMeat on August 27, 2016, 10:01:55 am
Too slow, I removed two frames and fixed a frame where the knee froze slightly and another where the leg wasn't extending enough in preparation for contact with ground! (http://imgur.com/Xa0qO3e.gif)
Title: Re: Running Warrior
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on August 28, 2016, 04:32:04 am
Wow that's a huge improvement! Thanks Meat. I can't even see much to improve. I had to enlarge it and I fixed some smoothness issues. Still need to work on that head. (http://i.imgur.com/eqXPoHz.gif)
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on October 01, 2016, 06:05:19 pm
The beginnings of a slash (http://i.imgur.com/VTBR8CM.gif)
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: MysteryMeat on October 01, 2016, 09:17:04 pm
Some small tweaks, felt like it was missing a frame and didn't stop at the right point to me! (http://imgur.com/rQAFI7z.gif)
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on October 01, 2016, 11:37:40 pm
Thanks Meat! I think that one is a bit too far extended, his wrist would twist off I think. I did a couple little edit to try to fix this. Possibility 1: (http://i.imgur.com/VOwYJXj.gif) Possibility 2: (http://i.imgur.com/CSbm3VV.gif)
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: MysteryMeat on October 02, 2016, 12:23:16 am
I'd say number 2, looks snappier. It still has that feeling of an incomplete movement though, like the swing's not gone all the way it needs to.
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on October 02, 2016, 06:08:00 am
Here's a little update, hopefully it helps some. It's mainly a fix to the legs and I added in the crouch that I noticed you had done in your edit. (http://i.imgur.com/EPNTbtq.gif) Edit: Actually I really like what you have done with the legs, especially the little twist in his foot at the end, so I've switched the legs to yours. I still think the sword goes a bit too far back in your edit though. (http://i.imgur.com/QzlOroc.gif)
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on October 12, 2016, 04:25:33 am
Added some more to the slash. Sorry about a bit weird timing, updating to the newest OS broke the software I was using to compile gifs :( The shockwave is still very wip. (http://i.imgur.com/X9wHE36.gif)
Title: Re: Warrior
Post by: MysteryMeat on October 12, 2016, 10:28:34 pm
The landing needs a bit more followthrough, duck his head and shoulders into the slam some i think