Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: ovle on August 23, 2016, 09:02:23 am

Title: C+C low-res portrait
Post by: ovle on August 23, 2016, 09:02:23 am

hi guys. got stuck with the portrait, mostly with light/shade. need your help
(http://imgur.com/j5fQhFi.png)
(http://imgur.com/Am4FK4M.png)

Title: Re: C+C low-res portrait
Post by: MysteryMeat on August 23, 2016, 12:19:28 pm

hairstyle that short wouldn't cast much of a shadow, that's usually reserved for longer/crazier styles. Try to tweak the face outline too, it gives it a chunky look that I don't think is quite working here.

Title: Re: C+C low-res portrait
Post by: SolarLune on August 23, 2016, 09:29:42 pm

I think it actually looks pretty cool as it stands, but I agree with MysteryMeat that the neck seems too thin for such a wide head, and that the shadow's too heavy under the hairline. I think I'd just make the neck and shoulders wider to compensate for the wide head, though.

It's nice and simple at the moment. I like 'em.

Title: Re: C+C low-res portrait
Post by: Alex Sinigaglia on August 27, 2016, 01:20:17 am

I edited it a little, I hope it helps:
(http://orig09.deviantart.net/f4a0/f/2016/239/0/3/small_portrait_edit_by_god_of_death_alex-dafix3p.gif)

Title: Re: C+C low-res portrait
Post by: ovle on August 31, 2016, 11:19:21 am

thanks a lot, guys) i'll try to rework it