Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: drZool on October 05, 2006, 09:03:41 pm
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I'm extending my avatar to a piece. Adding an advert with a leaf on to let the viewer think it's a normal frog at glance, just to realize...
(http://enedahl.com/images/frog_city3.png)
I'm just about done with the advert, started on the tank and the smoke. will be adding more houses and something to suspend the advert, perhaps a building. I've played with the palette a bit, but this monitor is way out of calibration :(
Signing off for today. Will begin my next day with fresh eyes and hopefully some good c&c from you.
/DrZool
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well, small crit but maybe make "leaf" bigger, it's too similar to "leap" so it may be mistaken. also, into that, I didn't understand the leaf was a leaf, maybe make the lights more yellow.
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Although it's good that you're doing more on this piece and it is generally well-executed, I think it looks more like two 64x64 images next to each other, probably due to the vertical ends of both the advertisement and the concrete bit beneath it creating a halfway line in the piece. As a next step, I think it would be a good idea to add a section to the right of the frog for balance.
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Thank you for the c&c!
Takei: Yes, the leaf needs more contrast from the lights... I'll see how I solve that.
MoD: True true. I will take care of that when adding more buildings behind the advert.