Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Shnurbs on August 19, 2016, 07:30:00 pm

Title: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: Shnurbs on August 19, 2016, 07:30:00 pm
Did this for pixel dailies. The propeller looks kinda wonky, but I dunno what I should do to fix it. Thoughts?

(http://i.imgur.com/1CYbL2m.png)
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: TheFox on August 19, 2016, 08:14:44 pm
I like the suit and the pose, but the face feels off. Shading makes it feel dead and it just doesn't feel like him. You got the hair pretty well though. Maybe simplify the propeller a bit more? Otherwise I like it.
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: MysteryMeat on August 19, 2016, 09:14:08 pm
For the propeller it looks like you drew the cone at an angle yet drew the blades facing the camera. Redraw the blades factoring in the angle of the boat, it may help to fix the problem.

Personally I like how inhuman the face looks, makes him really look like some kind of awful gremliny monster.
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: Shnurbs on August 19, 2016, 10:15:44 pm
I changed the propeller, added bubbles, added a thing on top of the boat, made Trump's face more expressive, and gave him man tits. The best man tits. Better man tits than russia or china.

(http://i.imgur.com/P3h2hYz.png)
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: TheFox on August 19, 2016, 10:33:40 pm
(http://static4.businessinsider.com/image/56c640526e97c625048b822a-480/donald-trump.jpg)
maybe more like this? For the expression.
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: PixelPiledriver on August 19, 2016, 11:13:20 pm
For more meaning I'd suggest add people drowning in the water as he looks at them and rides slowly away.
Otherwise, what is he doing or looking at?
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: Shnurbs on August 19, 2016, 11:36:02 pm
For more meaning I'd suggest add people drowning in the water as he looks at them and rides slowly away.
Otherwise, what is he doing or looking at?

christ thats dark

Anyway I added someone getting chopped up by the propeller and made Trump's face look a bit more like a fat five year old who just rubbed poop in someone's hair.

(http://i.imgur.com/ImZr6hG.png)

I feel like I may have gotten pretty fair away from the prompt of "yachting".
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: dpixel on August 20, 2016, 12:16:35 am
(http://i.imgur.com/Vhnhmpl.png)
Just an idea with the common thumbs up and his name on everything.

Better man tits than russia or china.
How about tits for Putin?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKEYoStTRww (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKEYoStTRww)
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: Shnurbs on August 20, 2016, 12:33:04 am
(http://i.imgur.com/Vhnhmpl.png)
Just an idea with the common thumbs up and his name on everything.

Better man tits than russia or china.
How about tits for Putin?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKEYoStTRww (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKEYoStTRww)

I like the name on the boat and the thumbs up, but I think it may detract more from "there is a yacht" aspect of the image.
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: [Friends] Ro$$ on August 20, 2016, 07:28:10 am

The body being cut up by the propeller is brilliant!
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: BadMoodTaylor on August 20, 2016, 02:55:42 pm
Why is his forehead so dark?
Title: Re: [C+C] Donald Trump On A Yacht
Post by: big brother on August 20, 2016, 06:36:58 pm
For realism his hands shouldn't be larger than a single pixel each.