Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DylanTheDev on July 11, 2016, 05:27:15 am
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This is for a game that I'm going to make.
The shading by the face and the fabric needs some help.
(http://imgur.com/6YdhdtQ.png)
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Hey! ;D nice work so far, but your shading is too rough, and you only shade the top piece while the corners of the face should be shaded too! And the head part of the robe is too wide. Now, i'm not really experienced, (also i'm not sure if i like the highlight on the shoulder) but here it is, too lazy to fix it again ;)
Before
(http://i.imgur.com/5ZjxfCQ.png)
After
(http://i.imgur.com/nHZFt05.png)
You will need to fix it again, i'm just making my point clear, not to make it look good, as you are the one who need to make it look good :)
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I tryed using warmer colors instead of making it darker and made the hood thinner
(http://i.imgur.com/XFZGKUU.png)
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darker color seems better to me, and warmer color in this case seem to.. does not make sense(?) since it's darker the more the robe covers. But if that seems fine to you, then well done :)