Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Elriks on July 04, 2016, 08:32:51 am

Title: Problem with a girl running animation
Post by: Elriks on July 04, 2016, 08:32:51 am

Hello,

Here is the latest update of a girl running animation for a platformer game. This animation has many problems, but I can not know how to solve them.

(https://media.giphy.com/media/l0HFj378FYWe7nG3C/giphy.gif)

1 - the animation is very masculine.
2 - the face becomes relatively ugly with the movement of the head . I do not know if we should avoid moving the face, although it would lose momentum.

If someone advice, referrals etc .. It will be of great help!

Thank you all!

Title: Re: Problem with a girl running animation
Post by: lachrymose on July 04, 2016, 10:57:00 am

Well at some point you significantly made her legs shorter and her shoulders broader, you've also added to her bust and her arms size. Which is why she is giving off a rather masculine vibe right now.

You need to raise the hips up, and reduce everything else basically.

Title: Re: Problem with a girl running animation
Post by: Elriks on July 04, 2016, 01:23:06 pm

I see what you mean, thank you Lachrymose