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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: sonicspin on July 03, 2016, 08:15:34 am

Title: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: sonicspin on July 03, 2016, 08:15:34 am
(https://i.sli.mg/moKZCU.png)
only saturated colors + 2 greys, left ear is too "perfect" for what i wanted  :blind:
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: CFKaligula on July 03, 2016, 02:54:51 pm
Why did you add the purple around her head? is it as a sort of outline or anti-alias?

I feel like her left ear is kind of pointy and jaggy, personally I think it would look great if both ears were "perfect". It also looks a bit weird that the right ear isn't connected to hear head.
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: sonicspin on July 03, 2016, 08:44:07 pm
Why did you add the purple around her head? is it as a sort of outline or anti-alias?
Anti-alias
I feel like her left ear is kind of pointy and jaggy, personally I think it would look great if both ears were "perfect". It also looks a bit weird that the right ear isn't connected to hear head.
ok, cleared the concept a bit, also got advice on Slack
(https://i.sli.mg/wbbhBO.png)
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: Seiseki on July 03, 2016, 09:44:48 pm
I don't think the outline is a good idea, it ruins the nice silhouette you had and looks a bit clumsy.
I also think the ears need a different color to fit the rest.

I like how vibrant it is though, and it's super cute!  :y:
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: sonicspin on July 04, 2016, 12:06:29 am
I don't think the outline is a good idea, it ruins the nice silhouette you had and looks a bit clumsy.
I also think the ears need a different color to fit the rest.

I like how vibrant it is though, and it's super cute!  :y:
(https://i.sli.mg/uHf35P.png)
alright, is this better?
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: PixelPiledriver on July 05, 2016, 10:35:42 pm
(https://4.bp.blogspot.com/-cW4vnjb5a8I/V3w13ScWnSI/AAAAAAAACiM/5_D3j9PRrVI6i8on7hpq1f-QjVWk0aP_QCLcB/s1600/bunny_edit_7.png) (https://1.bp.blogspot.com/-VG3Z-1jzi6M/V3w130-sFDI/AAAAAAAACiQ/aQadRSDOc9Ykmq4a4KkC7bKqwV_RYLPRwCLcB/s1600/bunny_edit_7.gif)
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: MysteryMeat on July 06, 2016, 05:44:59 am
i feel like that edit loses the somewhat neony feel of the original, good corrections but the blue shadows looked good as did the way they drew the eyes.
Title: Re: wannabe a bunny [c+c]
Post by: PixelPiledriver on July 06, 2016, 06:14:21 am
Def don't take the edit as fixes, just another path.
Choose your own.