Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: SKREAMIZM on June 29, 2016, 08:40:32 am

Title: My first pix art
Post by: SKREAMIZM on June 29, 2016, 08:40:32 am
Hello guys. I am newbie this profession.
(http://i.hizliresim.com/v4NBAp.png)

What i need better than good pixel art?

sorry for my bad english..
Title: Re: My first pix art
Post by: jun on June 29, 2016, 10:01:07 am
Welcome :) 

Nice start. For starters I'd recommend you don't scale it and post it at it's original resolution. (You can zoom by just left clicking a picture on the forums!)

A few thoughts: 
There are a few stray blue pixels near his face.
The contrast is too strong between the colors, try to reduce saturation on some!
There are some anatomy issues which can be fixed. (Unless you want it stylized)
The hair looks wonky! D:
Establish a light source. It'll really pull together your sprites.

Also I'd recommend not using a pure white background, but that's just me.
Can you post your reference sprite? (if any)
Title: Re: My first pix art
Post by: SKREAMIZM on June 29, 2016, 10:28:25 am
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The hair looks wonky! D:
Hahaha :lol:

Thank you for answer but i don't know anything about the " sprite ".
And what is this ?
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Establish a light source.
How can i do this?
Title: Re: My first pix art
Post by: drain. on June 29, 2016, 10:36:34 am
To repeat the ever-so-memorable quote by Atnas.

"Pixel Art is 90% Art and 10% pixel tech."

You should start learning the basics of drawing before you go straight unto pixel art, try drawing with a pencil and paper first, and learn the fundamentals of art, such as shading, anatomy and form.
Title: Re: My first pix art
Post by: jun on June 29, 2016, 10:36:59 am
Don't worry, we'll try to make it look nice! It's a very nice sprite for a beginner.

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Establish a light source.
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How can i do this?

Ah so, imagine there is a bulb in front of the character and the light is coming from that direction. Now imagine how it will interact with your character and where the shadows will be. Try it! It's real fun.
Title: Re: My first pix art
Post by: SKREAMIZM on June 29, 2016, 11:26:47 am
Thank you for all answers guys, i will try your thoughts. Take care of yourself! :)