Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: DylanTheDev on June 18, 2016, 05:40:44 am

Title: [C+C] Profile Picture
Post by: DylanTheDev on June 18, 2016, 05:40:44 am

This is the letter of it and I would like some critique on the 3D.
(http://imgur.com/dI7TAP7.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] Profile Picture
Post by: MysteryMeat on June 18, 2016, 06:13:15 am

mostly alright, but that little squarish bottom right but of the D isn't synched with the perspective on the rest of it.

Title: Re: [C+C] Profile Picture
Post by: DylanTheDev on June 21, 2016, 03:48:39 am

Here's my newest version of it this will give more things to edit.
(http://imgur.com/XiJNiVK.png)

Title: Re: [C+C] Profile Picture
Post by: Double7 on June 21, 2016, 02:29:25 pm

So the bottom right should have a diagonal line just like the top right part of the picture.

I am also going to challenge you to shade the character in the D with respect to the light source (the sun). Focus on the face and the jacket.

For the legs your knee is a little too far down on the leg, remember that your thigh is shorter than your calf.

It is looking a lot better though, I like the illumination effect that it has.

Title: Re: [C+C] Profile Picture
Post by: DylanTheDev on June 22, 2016, 03:10:35 am

I had to update the posture to make that edit but yeah I also implemented some shading in this version
(http://i.imgur.com/MIF8kJA.jpg)

Title: Re: [C+C] Profile Picture
Post by: DylanTheDev on June 24, 2016, 10:15:37 pm

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